first off, the concept behind this is abstract. You can make of it what you will. I have my interpretation.
I actually started this piece with the idea to keep it simple and this is what happened. I don't know what the deal is? I really like to tell a story with my work and I guess that most of my stories are complex, and in direct correlation, so is my art.
I also consider this a WIP. I'm putting it on DA to see what you guys say about it. Sometimes you have some great comments and critiques and I belive your input can make this a great piece, so comment away peeps!!
I really like the color you chose for this piece. That pose is nice also. I'm a little unsure about the heart at the bottom... I see where it fits with the story but it just looks odd. Maybe if you had them inside a heart instead??
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"I was going to conquer the world, but then I got distracted by something sparkly."
I totally disagree, I think the heart at the bottom is bloody fantastic. The pose of the people is brilliant, and I love the little quote/words/thingy. The techy stuff fits in perfectly with the piece, and the title. The colour scheme is excellent, and my only criticism would be the heart on their lips, I just don't think it fits. Apart from that, a great deviation. , as well.
i like the compotition and the hearts at the bottom, kinda old skool tattoo.... nice artwork dude ....i specially like the effect on the man and woman hair...
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Commintment is the crown not status ... "niuku"
Great piece brotha. Composition, colors... everything. Great. Okay now for the critique part. Not too content with the hearts, but of course that is only a matter of opinion. Do like the placement of the bottom heart, just not completely sure of the way it looks. The heart on the lips looks a bit off, kind of feel it takes away from the passion of the kiss, like cartoony. Forgive me if I sound a bit harsh, kind of distracted at the moment, but my intentions are true. Really do like the piece overall though.
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"I was going to conquer the world, but then I got distracted by something sparkly."
thanks so much for the critique! much appreciated.
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Commintment is the crown not status ... "niuku"
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